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This book is the perfect example of why characterization is so important in the stories. Without proper characterization, a reader doesn't attach to the character. And in this book, not even slight attempt was made to build the main characters even slightly. And not just that we lack knowledge of all of her background, we know nothing of her mentality. What's even worse, we don't even know even basics of the main character's physique. It's really surprising, because the appearance and physique of several of the other characters was described. Only the main character was omitted. Hence, with no attachment with the main character, and not knowing anything about the reason of anything, all we're left with scenes after scenes after scenes after scenes after scenes. I know ridiculous this sounds. But this is exactly how it feels when we read this book, only that each scene is comprised of hundreds of words. Two stars only because a few scenes were nicely 'harsh'. But the impact of rest of the boring stuff is so enormous that I would highly recommend avoiding this book, especially if you are fan of Miranda Birch.… (meer)
 
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Zakfar_Magni | Apr 5, 2023 |
Like every other story of Miranda Birch, the story has zero characterization and pathetic details about the scenario for giving it some realistic measure. And same as every other story, this doesn't feel like a story but a bunch of smut scenes jumbled upon randomly.
 
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Zakfar_Magni | Apr 5, 2023 |
In a way this third part also belongs to the same level as of the previous book. It has same momentum and cruelty. But a long three-part story surely deserves a proper ending. Though we are provided her a rushed abrupt ending without proper climax. Just left us with imagination as it's done in horror stories. But this not horror story. It's an erotica. Such an ending is kind of irritating. But otherwise it's a good story.
 
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Zakfar_Magni | Apr 5, 2023 |
First part was good. But the lack of proper characterization had delivered somewhat lackluster impact. By this second part now, the characters are in far better situation for the scenes to deliver the full impact those are supposed to. Hence, it is a very good book to read for anyone interested in Cruel Femdom stories.
 
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½ 2.5
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