Deja Black
Auteur van Broken Bones
Werken van Deja Black
Life's Greatest Masterpiece 1 exemplaar
Unbreak My Heart (Men of Neptune Book 4) 1 exemplaar
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Algemene kennis
- Geslacht
- female
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Statistieken
- Werken
- 7
- Leden
- 13
- Populariteit
- #774,335
- Waardering
- 3.5
- Besprekingen
- 4
- ISBNs
- 4
Writing from the standpoint of the bad guy takes all the mystery out of the murders, and contributed to my confusion because it introduced named characters who were ultimately unimportant. And I was confused far too often. I have no idea what the "Jordan" murders have to do with women being violent. I have no idea what in particular in that final battle set Kristoff off; that mention in the epilogue came off as an attempt to set up the next book, but like I said, just left me confused. Also, it appears the entire coven was slaughtered by their own, evil leader, so who exactly is Peter supposed to be in charge of? I take issue with the amount of death in general; a few important deaths have more emotional impact than wholesale slaughter, and no leader who executes whimsically will stay in power. Unless this was a coven of a hundred thousand people to start with, there's no one left to lead! Making her seem foreboding would have worked better with violent and cruel, but non-lethal, punishments of her minions. Beat them, scar them, make them watch as you torture a loved one...
Also, perhaps don't compare a dick to a bucket. His lover's body may be a well of pleasure, but just... no.… (meer)