J.A. Huss

I have to be honest, this is not my typical book, but I enjoyed it. It was a little off I guess because they're talking about a secret society, and that intrigued me but there's nothing much about it in the book.

Also I was a little jaded because I'm being bullied on this website and it's driving me a little insane. And as you know, as any reader knows, stress will definitely alter your opinion when you're reading a book.

I found this book because I was looking up my favorite genre, reverse harem books. And the second book in this series joey, is an RH book. But I have OCD when it comes to a series, and I have to read from the very beginning so that way I don't lose my place or get confused on what's going on in the book.

So that's how I came about reading jesse. It was funny. I laughed. And I worried about the characters. Can't wait to read joey.… (meer)

I enjoyed the book, there were a couple things that kind of irked me like a few times it wasn't very flowing and there was absolutely no talk about birth control after he just admittedly knocked somebody up. Well not just but well when you read the story you'll understand what I'm talking about. But, I liked it it was cute. I'm going to read at least one more of these bossy books, cuz I want Johnny story and then we'll see where I go from there.

And if you're wondering why you're not able to comment on my reviews, if you're not on my friends list, then you can blame the people that were bullying you over another review that I did. There's a lot of things I can stand for, but I'm not going to be cyber bullied.… (meer)

So I gave it three stars. First I gave it a star because it's the bossy brothers. Then I gave it another star because I do like the couple. The third star was because well it can be coming back because I wanted to finish the damn book.

The book would have been perfect if there was a little bit more fluidity to it and less details. We get lost in the details. There's so much details that you start to get confused on to where certain details fit into what.

By chapter 7 I wanted to hang it up and say forget it I'm not going to read this. I wish there was more clarity into what kind of book it is. It seemed like he had a history or experience as being a Navy seal of some sorts, but they don't talk about that. They don't talk about where he gets his experience killing I should say, but it just goes on and on and on. It makes him seem like a cleaner. And if you've read enough mob books you know where the cleaner is.

And the fluidity of Megan's story is kind of distorted. That's the best word I can come up with distorted. And nothing flows together. I know I keep on hanging up on this flowing together thing but that's a good story. A story that flows into each other, flows into each chapter, flows into each character. There is none of that here. If that's what you're looking for do not read this book.

If you want matter of fact and over detailed listings then sure this book's pretty good at that. And I'm not trying to be a bitch. For lack of a better word. I just didn't like the book.

I guess that last star was brought up because there are a few moments throughout the book that I actually enjoyed. And if they had just made it a little bit more fluid, than the whole book would have been awesome. There is a scene with dolphins, and that was amazing. There is a scene at the beach when they're alone together and that was amazing. There are different parts of the book that were amazing however they just didn't make sense.

They really need it to make the scenes blend better. Because honestly I'm still confused. I get that the woman was his mother. I get that the father was sitting there as well. I get that they went and spent time with the Dumas family however that one right there was confusing too.

When Megan's talking she says that they're leaving the next day but when Johnny is talking they say that they've been there for 3 days. Now when Megan said that they were leaving the next day, she was talking that they landed in the Keys and stayed for 24 hours. But with Johnny it's a different story. Does that make sense to you guys? That's what I mean by not being fluid. The details are there but they're all so mixed up and there's so many of them. They could have just easily with the details cut them down to half size. It's like they were trying to make a page quota or something.

But like I said I enjoyed parts of the story, and I enjoyed the couple, and I enjoyed the fact that they got out at the end. But honestly the rest of it was just noise.

Would I recommend this book to anyone else? I suppose so. Because if you're like me and have OCD and you start a series you want to finish the series, then yes read this book. But if you can survive without reading Johnny story I say skip it. But again I can what's the word that I'm looking for, appreciate how hard an author works on their book. So therefore I say read it. And then share with me what you thought of the book. Keep in mind those details. Because I'm telling you there are so many details. I still am unclear about what this book is about if it's about espionage, society, I mean actually I suppose it is a secret society but still. I'm just still confused. And hopefully we don't have to deal with it during the wedding. Well weddings. Enjoy the review folks I know it's not my best but I tried to explain why I didn't like the book. And that's what a review is about right?

I will say this though, I wish I knew what book the other people were reading. I'm thinking that maybe I'm missing something here? Who knows.… (meer)