Michele Lang
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I thought it was going to be good
I was wrong.
Each of the first three chapters read like a ‘first’ chapter, all the way to introducing (again) the MC. Repetition of key points becomes laughable - she keep lavender in her office; she keeps lavender in her office; oh, by the way...
There is no sense of time. MC woke up at 6am, had coffee, made a phone call or two, took a taxi across town, spoke to her mother...somehow the sun is now sinking toward the horizon?
This badly needs professional editing. I found all these issues before finishing 1/5th of the book.
… (meer)
I was wrong.
Each of the first three chapters read like a ‘first’ chapter, all the way to introducing (again) the MC. Repetition of key points becomes laughable - she keep lavender in her office; she keeps lavender in her office; oh, by the way...
There is no sense of time. MC woke up at 6am, had coffee, made a phone call or two, took a taxi across town, spoke to her mother...somehow the sun is now sinking toward the horizon?
This badly needs professional editing. I found all these issues before finishing 1/5th of the book.
… (meer)
It seemed very disjointed, wasn't sure where the story was going and the end was a puzzle too
Eh. It's an okay story, but it didn't grab me, and isn't quite appealing enough to take up any more of my reading time. I read the first few chapters, and the last and just wasn't impressed.
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I was wrong.
Each of the first three chapters read like a ‘first’ chapter, all the way to introducing (again) the MC. Repetition of key points becomes laughable - she keep lavender in her office; she keeps lavender in her office; oh, by the way...
There is no sense of time. MC woke up at 6am, had coffee, made a phone call or two, took a taxi across town, spoke to her mother...somehow the sun is now sinking toward the horizon?
This badly needs professional editing. I found all these issues before finishing 1/5th of the book.
… (meer)