2Smiley_Scorpio
please post Haikus here.
3Smiley_Scorpio
SUNSET
As the sunset goes
I walk with you holding hands
Darkness is not there
SUMMER
Swimming in the sun
Party from dusk til’ dawn
Now this is summer
As the sunset goes
I walk with you holding hands
Darkness is not there
SUMMER
Swimming in the sun
Party from dusk til’ dawn
Now this is summer
4Sparrowing
dia de vida
chicos juegan, todavia
celebran muerto
day of life
children play, still
they celebrate death
chicos juegan, todavia
celebran muerto
day of life
children play, still
they celebrate death
5yareader2
a single rose
blooming in the sunlight
and in my eyes
-Kenneth Tanemurah
Right in the middle
of the cat's yawn---
a pink tongue
-Arizona Zipper
(Is it ok to enter published poems here or do you just want entries from participants?)
blooming in the sunlight
and in my eyes
-Kenneth Tanemurah
Right in the middle
of the cat's yawn---
a pink tongue
-Arizona Zipper
(Is it ok to enter published poems here or do you just want entries from participants?)
6Smiley_Scorpio
either, as long as it's haiku
7jburlinson
Playoff Haiku
A winter giant
Squeezes a packer's femur,
Leaving a dark bruise.
A winter giant
Squeezes a packer's femur,
Leaving a dark bruise.
9cheznomore
counting syllables
in principle or practice
is too much work, so . . .
in principle or practice
is too much work, so . . .
10Jakeofalltrades
Writer's strike
Hollywood starving
four cents could solve it
Hollywood starving
four cents could solve it
11walden_girl
path by the cemetery
generations of abbots
fallen camelias
--Mitsu Suzuki
(my favorite haiku of all time. )
generations of abbots
fallen camelias
--Mitsu Suzuki
(my favorite haiku of all time. )
12lilithcat
It is not haiku
if there is no seasonal
reference given.
Here's one:
Haiku for Wrigleyville on opening day:
Beer and a ball game
On a summer afternoon -
Now come parking woes.
if there is no seasonal
reference given.
Here's one:
Haiku for Wrigleyville on opening day:
Beer and a ball game
On a summer afternoon -
Now come parking woes.
13Jakeofalltrades
Summer television
Off season drivel
Bring back good shows!
Australian winter
freezing without frost
No snow for Joe
Off season drivel
Bring back good shows!
Australian winter
freezing without frost
No snow for Joe
14jesslyncummings
>9 cheznomore: Possibly the best haiku ever!
15felius
Seasonal reference
conspicuously absent;
I can deal with that.
The ultra-short form
still needs structure to succeed;
Count five, seven, five.
How about:
Summer's straggling rays
cut through Autumn's first onslaught;
Nature loves balance.
Or:
Autumnal hues glow -
Winds rise, the whine increases;
Our servers run hot.
conspicuously absent;
I can deal with that.
The ultra-short form
still needs structure to succeed;
Count five, seven, five.
How about:
Summer's straggling rays
cut through Autumn's first onslaught;
Nature loves balance.
Or:
Autumnal hues glow -
Winds rise, the whine increases;
Our servers run hot.
17aviddiva
Feeling important
In his new blue suit, the boy
Carries wedding rings.
My brother got married this afternoon and my son was the ring bearer.
In his new blue suit, the boy
Carries wedding rings.
My brother got married this afternoon and my son was the ring bearer.
18pockerhand
As a test wrote three in jest-- first post--
Grass has a spear tip
Often one inch and high enough
To calm itchy feet
Above feet is the head
Lay it down, lay it down, wait
It will rise tonight
Tonight in moonlight
The head is becalmed. marooned
Because the grass was there
Grass has a spear tip
Often one inch and high enough
To calm itchy feet
Above feet is the head
Lay it down, lay it down, wait
It will rise tonight
Tonight in moonlight
The head is becalmed. marooned
Because the grass was there
21puddleshark
Dockside in darkness
Unstrapped loads and a force nine
Horizontal rain
Unstrapped loads and a force nine
Horizontal rain
24puddleshark
Trawl-nets and trip-wires
The dark trees decked in silver
Spiderwebs in mist
The dark trees decked in silver
Spiderwebs in mist
27LeonStevens
When writing Haiku
When do you get to the point
Of not counting fing
(@#%*!)
When do you get to the point
Of not counting fing
(@#%*!)
28jldarden
>24 puddleshark: puddleshark I think this is excellent!