Forget the verisimilitude and forgive the predictability in order to enjoy this kinky tale. ( )

Along with the usual - good story, interesting characters - I really enjoyed the unique "voice" in this short. The word choices and resulting sentence structure required me to joyfully pay attention. (All too often author's in the M/M genre rely on the same old cliched phrases, which tends to throw me out of the story and causes much peevishness in my cold, black heart!)

I enjoyed this story, but I was annoyed with Niall for not listening to Dan and everything that happened to him because he didn't listen, and then Dan just let it go like nothing major happened. I really just wanted to smack them both upside the head. ( )