Back in 2018, when I was finally able to get around to reading the first book in this series, I wrapped up that endeavor being impressed by the effort that Ms. Griffith had put into the novel, but had to admit that I more respected the work than loved it.

Flashing forward to 2024, I find myself in much the same boat. Hild is a great character, and I do love the way that Griffith writes about the landscape and environment of the England of the period as a character in and of itself. However, it does appear to be that now Dr. Griffith (she has picked up a doctorate in medieval history in the interim) is undertaking the endeavor of writing her own chronicle of England, and I'm not sure that I'm signing up for that in the long run. Here's the thing: Originally billed as the "Light of the World" series, Hild's story is now being billed as the "Hild Sequence," and a sequence sounds significantly longer than a trilogy. While I applaud Griffith's ambition, a lot of people have come up with ambitious writing programs that they were/are unable to conclude.

Realizing that this all sounds like damning with faint praise, I do expect to be looking at the follow-on books. ( )

Ten years after Hild, we get the long-awaited sequel Menewood. We rejoin Hild, now in her late teens, and finding her homelands on the verge of war and having to figure out how to navigate that in a way that keeps her family (by blood and by choice) safe. This is a story of grief and community and power.

As with the first book, Nicola Griffith clearly relishes the epic sweep of the tale she's telling and loves the particularities of the land she's talking about—having read this book, I feel I'd have a reasonable chance of being able to navigate around Northumbria if you plonked me down there today, just based on Griffith's loving descriptions of it. The prose is also clearly crafted to echo medieval epic poetry, with the repetition of epithets and by-names and the use of alliteration.

That epic strength of the book is also its major weakness: it really is just too long, especially since I didn't feel that the narrative's ruminations on the book's themes weren't quite deep enough, the characters (and there are a lot of them) fleshed-out enough, to make it feel like a page count that ran into the several hundreds were earned. It was also obvious from the get-go that in order for Hild to end up as the abbess Hilda of Whitby, neither husband nor baby were long for this world. I was fine with Cian dying because my stomach for reading about someone rhapsodying about the smell of the smell of her husband/half-brother when they fuck is, uh, low. But the circumstances of the birth/death of Hild's infant daughter were both really upsetting and just a bit too OTT for me to be able to roll with. If you're writing a book that puts such emphasis on realistic world-building that you go way into detail on how you butcher a horse and prep its hide to make parchment, you make it much more difficult for me to buy an extended scene in which a woman in active labour fights on horseback and on foot in a full-on battle.

I will probably continue on with the series, should Griffith publish a sequel, but I hope that she'll either get an editor more willing to tell her 'no' or that she learns how to stop over-writing. ( )

Fantastic. Read Hild first for the best experience ( )

I had to go back and re-read Hild before this and I'm glad I did that. I'm not surprised that this book is heartbreaking, because how could it not be? But it's also a fierce and glorious book, one where Hild breaks and is mended and carries on and comes to a new chapter. Long, immersive, obsessively good, and the vivid world inside keeps turning as fate goes ever as it must. Devastating in all the best and worst meanings of that word. Absolutely beautiful.

advanced readers copy provided by Edelweiss ( )

The Hild saga continues!

Early Middle Ages, Northumbria. The Romans have mostly left Britain. This is no cohesive country, but rather kingdoms or tribes that are constantly at war. The roman priests are gaining some influence. Importantly they bring the written word. Communication is enhanced. It is a record of accord, especially if all parties have a signed and witnessed statement. Hild uses this to ensure her conditions of agreement are not set aside later in the novel.
I also noted that later Hild warned King Oswald about letting the bishop speak to his people for him.
Hild Yffing, “light of the world and godmouth; hægtes and freemartin; Butcherbird and king’s fist ... [and] new-made Lady of Elmet.”
Hild is niece to Edwin Yffing, Overking of the people north of the Humbre. A woman surrounded by mystique, legend and song.
Hild has seen what kings can do to the common people and to the land. (After winning a battle kings have a war-host that needs to be kept occupied. That’s trouble.) She has already planned for a safe place to live and hide deep in Elmet, in Menewood. Hild’s had caches of food and supplies hidden, and unobtrusive gardens sown throughout the countryside. She’s walked and ridden that land, payed attention to the seasons, the flight of birds, the way the streams run. She notes it all. That sense of oneness with the land lifts her story.
When King Edwin plans to face a cunning and ruthless foe, Cadwallon, (who is determined to wipe all Yffings of the faces of the land), Hild is troubled when some of Edwin’s allies haven’t sworn to him in the traditional way. Edwin is unconcerned. He should be!
Hild has been called to bless the warband and Edwin’s undertaking in the coming battle. She had planned to leave straight after, but Edwin insists on taking his ‘godmouth’ with him to the front.
Big with child, Hild and her Hounds, her gesith (elite fighting force), are trapped between the opposing armies. They can’t escape the surging hoards, filled with battle lust. Betrayal is the key to the fiercesome, brutal battle that follows. It is the death knell, the tragic loss of all Hild holds dear.
Her escape back to Menewood will be sorely endured and won over many months.
Hild is religious, both aware of the old ways and the new ways. She merges pagan and Christian practices, seeing the strengths of both.
Her final battles has her seeking the best for her people, but always the will of kings will be troublesome. Hild is special, she is fierce and true, and kings want to control her.
I loved the glossary. It helped me to come closer to the story.
Colorful, raw and splendid writing gives shape to the person Hild is become. Her Wyrd is not finished.
An enticing, readable and at times harrowing continuation of Hild’s story brought to life in startling ways. A book that simultaneously gives us an insight into what many thought of as the Dark Ages. An age that reveals the beauty and the hell of human history … that continues into today.

A Farrar, Straus and Giroux ARC via NetGalley.
Many thanks to the author and publisher.
Please note: Quotes taken from an advanced reading copy maybe subject to change ( )