Devyn Jayse
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Magic Runes (Magic Runes, #1) door Devyn Jayse
The story was very predictable, but I still enjoyed it. I like the characters well enough to consider reading book 2.
Bipolar
I say that because most of the time it feels like it is happening in the US (SBI, because naturally a worldwide enforcement bureau would use American naming protocols). It just seemed like the Spanish setting was a thin overlay.
There were a lot of dialogue problems. Usually, speakers alternate with each new paragraph. Unfortunately, that wasn’t always the case, making it difficult to parse who was doing what, especially letter in the book.
The police interactions are off kilter. How did they miss the link?!?!? Greta actually mentioned it!!!
Grammar and spelling weren’t too bad. A few awkward sentences, but nothing terrible.
If the next one is in KU, I may give it a shot, but I’m not paying extra for this. It needs a content editor more than anything else.… (meer)
I say that because most of the time it feels like it is happening in the US (SBI, because naturally a worldwide enforcement bureau would use American naming protocols). It just seemed like the Spanish setting was a thin overlay.
There were a lot of dialogue problems. Usually, speakers alternate with each new paragraph. Unfortunately, that wasn’t always the case, making it difficult to parse who was doing what, especially letter in the book.
The police interactions are off kilter. How did they miss the link?!?!? Greta actually mentioned it!!!
Grammar and spelling weren’t too bad. A few awkward sentences, but nothing terrible.
If the next one is in KU, I may give it a shot, but I’m not paying extra for this. It needs a content editor more than anything else.… (meer)
Bipolar
I say that because most of the time it feels like it is happening in the US (SBI, because naturally a worldwide enforcement bureau would use American naming protocols). It just seemed like the Spanish setting was a thin overlay.
There were a lot of dialogue problems. Usually, speakers alternate with each new paragraph. Unfortunately, that wasn’t always the case, making it difficult to parse who was doing what, especially letter in the book.
The police interactions are off kilter. How did they miss the link?!?!? Greta actually mentioned it!!!
Grammar and spelling weren’t too bad. A few awkward sentences, but nothing terrible.
If the next one is in KU, I may give it a shot, but I’m not paying extra for this. It needs a content editor more than anything else.… (meer)
I say that because most of the time it feels like it is happening in the US (SBI, because naturally a worldwide enforcement bureau would use American naming protocols). It just seemed like the Spanish setting was a thin overlay.
There were a lot of dialogue problems. Usually, speakers alternate with each new paragraph. Unfortunately, that wasn’t always the case, making it difficult to parse who was doing what, especially letter in the book.
The police interactions are off kilter. How did they miss the link?!?!? Greta actually mentioned it!!!
Grammar and spelling weren’t too bad. A few awkward sentences, but nothing terrible.
If the next one is in KU, I may give it a shot, but I’m not paying extra for this. It needs a content editor more than anything else.… (meer)
This was disappointing. The content- setting, world building, decent characters were there. However, the grammatical errors, missing words or wrong words, repetitious statements just got worse as the story went on.
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