Annette Keen

Jake comes to London. It is a holiday weekend. And he wants to go to the Notting Hill Carnival and see some interesting places from the bus. In the carnival he looks at the beautiful, tall girl. Their eyes meet and she smiles at him. He knows. It’s love! Jake wants to meet her. He asks for her telephone number. She gives a big smile, but Jake can’t hear her! There is a lot of music and people are shouting. Jake sees a camera on the table. He wants a photograph of Maria. He takes the camera and runs quickly after the float.
And policewoman Day comes in looks at Jake, he looks at her. Looks at this photo, Maria. The sergeant says here you are at the doctor’s –or perhaps The Carnival.

I like this story because is very romance. I dint like this story because a boat the Carnival what’s happening with Jake and want won photo foramina.

Jake was now in London as a tourist he want to visit Netting hill carnival and some interesting places. In carnival he listen music let’s of people in carnival costume. Suddenly he sows a beautiful girl in yellow carnival costume. And he fell in love with her He want to see and talk with her, he even ignore his friends there is a lot of music noise and crowd. At last girl notice the Jake and they Identified there self. He wants her telephone number but not possible because of crowd he takes a camera from the table of cafe and want to get picture of Maria. But the cemya owner complain about the lost camera and police man catch the Jake and take him in police station when they found picture of girl they soupiness and call one police women in office and Jake surprise to see police women because she is the girl which he see in carnival and fell in love.

Carnival in London. Jake is in the weekend comes to London. He is very happy then he goes to Netting Hill carnival and he sees a beautiful tall girl in her carnival costume. Jake loves this girl and says he wants her telephone number. Then Jake sees a camera on the table. He takes the camera because he wants one photo of Maria. The tourist finds a policeman the policeman catches Jake because he thinks that Jake is a robber. The policeman takes the photo off Jake and looks at the photo and they smile why? The door opens and policewoman Day comes in. “It is you!” they say at the same time.

it is very nice story . i like every thing in this story

I like this book because it's easy.

I like this story because is very nice. I like the end of story and carnival of the story is very beautiful.

I like the book because the boy "Jake" in the story when he saw the girl "Maria" and he like her even when he was far away from her he find a camera and take a photo of Maria

I liked this book because it talks about the story was boy in London and went on the weekend to enjoy in the Carnival

I like this story because is very nice.I like the end of story and Carnival of story is very beautiful .

Jake was honest when the policeman arrested him and honest with his love.

He was very romantic . Was seriously in love.

Jake goes to London in weekend .After that he goes to Notting Hill carnival he sees a beautiful girl. Her costum is yellow. Their eyes meet and she smiles at him he runs and talks with her because he wants her number but he can’t hear her because all the people are shouting. A police man catches Jake. Then the sergeant looks at the photograph. He looks at police Women Day this is a photograph of her and they are so happy.

Carnival in London. Jake is in the weekend comes to London. He is very happy then he goes to Notting Hill carnival and he sees a beautiful tall girl in her carnival costume. Jake loves this girl and says he wants her telephone number. Then Jake sees a camera on the table. He takes the camera because he wants one photo of Maria. The tourist finds a policeman the policeman catches Jake because he thinks that Jake is a robber. The policeman takes the photo off Jake and looks at the photo and they smile why? The door opens and policewoman Day comes in. “It is you!” they say at the same time.

Jake goes to London and takes a bus to the carnival. He sees Maria. Its love and he runs to take her number and takes her photo. He wants Maria’s telephone number she gives a big smile. But Jake can’t hear the band is playing and people are shouting. Jake sees a camera on the table. He wants a photograph of Maria. He takes the camera and runs quickly after the float.
The door opens and police woman Day comes in looks at Jake. He looks at her. Look at this photo, Maria the sergeant says. Here you are the doctor’s or perhaps the carnival.

Jake travels to London and goes by bus to the carnival. He sits on a bench, and the carnival starts to move down the street. He sees a beautiful girl in a yellow red costume her name’s Maria. Jake sees camera on the table. He wants a photograph of Maria. He runs quickly after the float, but Jake can’t sees Maria because many people are in the street and Maria is busy , but Jake runs after the float ,and he sees Maria and she sees him and she waves . The tourist finds a police man. The police man catches Jake. After that the sergeant looks at the photo graph. He is surprised. The police man calls the police woman and the sees the photo and the police woman is surprised.

Jake goes to London .After that he goes to Notting Hill carnival he sees a beautiful girl.Her costum is yellow. Their eyes meet and she smiles at him he runs and talks with her because he wants her number but he can’t hear her because all the people are shouting. Jake takes a camera from tourist. A police man catches Jake. Then the sergeant looks at the photograph. He looks at police Women Day this is a photograph of her and they are so happy.

The name of story is Carnival and author’s name is Annette Keen. This story talks about Jake and his love Maria .The event starts when Jake went to London and caught the bus and went to the carnival. Jake sat on the bench in Notting Hill. Suddenly, he sees some people in costumes. In the float he sees a girl in a costume with a yellow dress and he loves her . He starts to run behind her to take her number and photo . He got a camera off the table. After that the tourist came back and he didn’t see his camera .He talked to the police man about some thief taking his camera. Next he saw Jake with his camera . The police man took Jake to the police station. The police man saw in Jake pockets and he saw many things .One of the things was the image of Maria and the truth came out because Maria said to her sergeant she went to doctor but she went to carnival.

I liked story because it exciting events also I like pictures but I dont like because it short story.

I like this story because is very romance.I dont like this story because about the carnival what's happening with jake. He want to win photo competition.

The story of the book was interesting. it has ag reat topic which I like most. It tells about travel, meeting new friends, new place and especially its all about love and surprises.

This story about Jake when he went to London he see a beautiful girl at the carnival.I like this book because it is love story.Also love is very good thing.

I liked the story because it is romantic and I love stories much. And I liked the way he spoke to Jake with a girl. Jake loves a girl with a beautiful smile.

Jake sees a tall beautiful girl at the carnival in London. Their eyes meet and she smiles at him. It’s love! How can he talk to this beautiful girl? And who is she?

I like this story Because jake sees a tall beautiful girl at the Carnival in london. Their eyes meet and she smiles at him.

This story is funny and i like this story because it's not boring.

I like this story because i like the carnival. It is very happy holiday.

It is an enthralling story, because the events of the carnival and recreation .

This is a story of of events and problems that occur in the Carnival

I like this story because it's has adventures

I like this story because the adventures in the carnival

I do not liked this story because I do not understand anything

The story is so nice because it is a romantic story and I like a romantic stories.… (meer)