Lorraine Kennedy

the story worked for me - but the ending wrap-up to happily ever after was WAY to quick - there was room for a lot more development - that would have made things better

again a book with goode development in plot. characters and world ... but the hasty wrap-up. I almost get the feeling the author was tied of writing the story and just wanted to get it over with. i find this sad, this ending could have been so much better

I think this writer is a pro at the hasty ending...if find this disappointing, but for the most part it was an ok story

Good story. A far better ending and not so quick on the path to "happily ever after" , it was more like a cliff hanger - which will allow for the bridge into the next book