Jon Messenger
Auteur van Wolves of the Northern Rift
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- Geboortedatum
- 1979
- Geslacht
- male
- Nationaliteit
- UK
USA - Geboorteplaats
- London, England, UK
- Opleiding
- University of Southern California (2002)
- Beroepen
- army officer
writer - Organisaties
- U.S. Army
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- 343
- Populariteit
- #69,543
- Waardering
- 3.6
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- 15
- ISBNs
- 24
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- 1
I feel like this could be a good concept, both as a steam punk and mythological creature entry. But the execution leaves much to be desired. There's showing, there's details for details sake, then there's extraneous details that really are pointless unless it's unusual.
The story has a good germ beneath, but the layers of extensive wordiness just bury the concept. There are also points where the Point of View (POV) shifts mid-paragraph between Simon and Luthor, which tends to come across as jarring. I gave up at the end of Chapter 9.… (meer)