Amira Rain
Auteur van Melted By The Dragon
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Her Lion Guard: Part 1 4 exemplaren
Her Lion Guard: Part 2 3 exemplaren
The Dragon Gene (WereGenes, #1) 2 exemplaren
The Gifted Box Set 2 exemplaren
Bear In The City (BBW Shifter Romance) 2 exemplaren
Her Lion Guard: Part 3 2 exemplaren
Simply Alpha Wolves 1 exemplaar
Melted By The Vampires 1 exemplaar
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It was interesting but considering the title, extremely vanilla. I'd be interesting in checking out other books in the series, but I get the feeling they are going to have a very similar plot.
Finished Reading July 30, 2016
Melted By The Dragon by Amira Rain is a Paranormal Romance.
It is very badly written. It starts off well then quickly deteriorates. This book is in severe need of the mighty 'Blue Pencil'.
Punctuation of conversations need correcting. The conversations themselves are also dull and repetitive. Often infantile. Overuse of the word 'Well' at the beginning of conversations. Due to improper punctuation it is difficult to know who is speaking and when a conversation is over.
A lot of mundane and unnecessary information about absolutely nothing. Over explaining information we already know and not enough action.
Sentence's that need editing (as in delete words) and better structure needed.
Paragraphs that run on and on, but don't do anything for world nor character building.
After the 1st couple of chapters it became extremely difficult to continue reading. And that is a real shame. There is a good story sitting here. But it is so bogged down in problems you just lose interest.
This book was definitely not ready for publishing.
Purchased from Amazon February 8, 2016… (meer)
Melted By The Dragon by Amira Rain is a Paranormal Romance.
It is very badly written. It starts off well then quickly deteriorates. This book is in severe need of the mighty 'Blue Pencil'.
Punctuation of conversations need correcting. The conversations themselves are also dull and repetitive. Often infantile. Overuse of the word 'Well' at the beginning of conversations. Due to improper punctuation it is difficult to know who is speaking and when a conversation is over.
A lot of mundane and unnecessary information about absolutely nothing. Over explaining information we already know and not enough action.
Sentence's that need editing (as in delete words) and better structure needed.
Paragraphs that run on and on, but don't do anything for world nor character building.
After the 1st couple of chapters it became extremely difficult to continue reading. And that is a real shame. There is a good story sitting here. But it is so bogged down in problems you just lose interest.
This book was definitely not ready for publishing.
Purchased from Amazon February 8, 2016… (meer)
Liked the story. The writing was a bit stilted and at times disconnected. The spanking was a major annoyance, though it was short. The sex could have been less abrupt and more sexy.
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- #130,374
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- 3.2
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