What happened to M. W. Phelps. His writing has gone downhill or this is just and oldie but I am struggling. Not because the story because this is one of my interests.

I have a lot of books where young kids kill but the writing is so annoying. From page 1 he is skipping from time to time. it is very confusing and he also very much adds his thoughts in the book so it is also quite judgemental.

Normally I would have finished in a day or 2 but this is surprisingly even getting boring because he is repeating a lot of stuff.

Update: I kept on reading because I wanted to know what happened but Ijust should have looked them up online. I did watch the pictures

Okay main reason why I did not like this book:

*Jumping from time period and assuming you already know some stuff

* Lots of repetition

* But if there is one thing I hate is when true crime authors besides telling us who did what in chapter 1 is constantly letting their opinion know.
I got so sick of the sarcastic remarks about Sarah. yes we know Mister Phelps thought her not pretty (ugly)and a horrible person and a bully.
Yes it was apparent that he also did not like the prosecutor. later I found out why because that man did not grant him an interview.

yes I understand that when you write about real people it is very hard to not show your thoughts and yes in a lot of books you can read behind the lines what the author thinks, but in mr Phelps and lately also in Ann Rule's books they are constantly telling us, trying to assure us that so and so is an angel but him and her are horrible people.

They do not think we can think for ourselves apparently.

I know this author has written good books as well. I have received a lot of his books so I am not going to give up on him.




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