Interesting premise but not my cup of tea when it comes to adult romance. It was a short story and the characters weren't fleshed out enough for me to try others in the series to discover if the story got better. ( )

I wasn't really that impressed with this story. It's got the sex, but parts really aren't that believable. Oh and I wouldn't have paid for this book either. It's too short to even pay $0.99 for it. Thankfully it was free on Amazon when I got it. ( )

I stopped reading this at 76%.
The editing and spelling of this novella is good.
The story line is solid office porn (MMMf) delivered porn movie style.
The writing style and observations about the characters and their actions strongly suggest a male writer at work. The feelings ascribed to the female main character seem to stem from a male mind and it hindered me to connect with her as a character.
E.g.:
At 65% she is fellating two men: "Their thick, bulbous heads were then both inside her mouth, puffing out her cheeks and fighting for real estate, just like in her fantasies."
At 68% "She watched Cunningham avail himself of an XXL condom and wondered if they were going to physically ruin her as well."
At 76% "... Jonathan groaned and flooded what felt like gallons of salty come into her throat. She choked on it, but only because she wasn't expecting there to be so much. Beneath her, Cunningham got even harder as she coughed, the sadist."

/ Rolls eyes... ( )

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Office Toy by Cleo Peitsche is a quick romp into the life of an office toy, a sexual submissive. ( )

ARC provide by NetGalley by publisher/author for an honest review.

Storyline: 2.0
Steam factor: 4.0

During an interview with Cunningham Elle is asked to discard her clothing and participate in a variety of sexual activities with three men in the office. I was very shocked by the storyline and how detailed it was it. I found the writing to be wonderful and fully capable to getting me excited.

In the beginning of the story, Elle is discussing her sexual needs and liberties that have been placed on hiatus because of a visit from her mother. I truly thought that Elle was daydreaming while she was waiting for her interview. After seeing their pictures at work, she formulated a fantasy.

I am eager to read the other books of this series. I am curious to see if Cunningham will admit that he wants Elle or will Elle decide that if she can not have what she wants, since in this book she is more focused on Cunningham and him being an alpha male, will she be with Jonathan. ( )