This was an interesting older HP. The heroine was written as calm and cool and collected. The hero would have greatly benefited by having a few scenes in his POV. The major portion of the story took place over a week and the end came after a month and felt odd because their feelings seemed extreme for the amount of time that passed. And here the book could have been saved from that by just throwing in the words early the next week several times and it would have been more believable. The biggest problem with the book is that it ended suddenly in only two pages. There was insufficient sorting out of details and I was left wanting to know more about what the hero had been feeling throughout the falling in love portion of the story and his I love you was sort of lame too. However there were some very strong scenes in this book that with just a little more details and description would have been killer.There was a scene at the end where he blew up because she had answered the door to a delivery man topless in just a loose robe and the hero went ballistic. It just needed more to be a super hot sceneThe hero was a very alpha guy and not in a nasty HP way but in a good way. I think had this book been written more recently he would have been developed much more along those lines. So nice but kind of missed the mark for a modern reader. ( )