Damn, I wished I read this in my earlier MM days. I think my enthusiasm would have been epic for the cuteness of this light, short read. It was cute without being annoying. There's a shy yet rude geek, Gil who finally gets his crush, Dustin alone in his bedroom due to some hot temperatures and having the lone air conditioner. Actually sounds like a set up for some porn too now that I think about it.

Enjoyable short read. Eh I could say I wish there was more but I don't. Good enough ending for me.

:) 3.5 STARS

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A sweet and tender love story about two young guys in love. This is basically all the plot and Gil and Dustin are also two representative of the usual crowd of a college dorm, the geek and the jock, and when these two types meet, usually the result is always nice.

The main difference in this story is that, where Gil is obviously shy, also Dustin is not exactly daring, and so they are dancing around each other, both of them trying to draw attention without being too obvious. Then during an hot summer night, Dustin finally has the courage to admit that, if he is always around Gil, asking stupid question and basically trying to steal time with him, it’s since he is interested in him more than as a simple roommate.

This is only a short story, barely a night in their life, and so obviously there is no time to further develop the relationship, but it was nice to read how both Gil and Dustin are shy but tentative in bed, how both of them want to please the other more than themselves. They are so sweet that I felt for them, wondering how two sweet and kind guys like them will survive once they will go out the safe shelter of Gil’s bedroom. But this is probably another story.

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