James T. Callum

MC is send to a fantasy world and gets a mark that makes him rival to the founder - the ruling person on that world.
During reading i never had the feeling this is a consistent world - it is more like the author discovers it while writing.
Nevertheless the litrpg system is fun - even if i lost overview about all the skills and perks and stuff early.
The book would really gain from loosing some weight. Saying that i mean it could be better with some serious editing that involves shortening or even ripping out some parts.… (meer)