Charmain Marie MitchellBesprekingen

This story is worth reading if you don’t mind amateurish writing - awkward punctuation, misused punctuation, nonsensical italics seemingly for emphasis, awkward descriptions of speech and action, sentence fragments. It does have a nice surprising ending, though.

Quick story, with an unexpected twist. Was enjoyable for a few minutes of reading, but I could have used a little more explanation of a character's motivation. Seems a little random and the two character's were only there to serve for the twist. Still was a good read though.