Amity Harris

I don't understand why some authors declare a book Femdom when there is more Gaydom there than Femdom. In fact, why can't they understand that Femdom and Gaydom are entirely different orientations? Some people can like both, but most people into one type have serious hard limits for the other. The book's first short chapter had a brief Femdom scene, and then the story became entirely Gaydom. And it remained that for many chapters. Later when a dominant female entered the story, all of her scenes were infused with Gaydom presence. Hence, all those scenes are also irritating and frustrating for pure Femdom readers.

There are numerous other problems with the book as well. A submissive man teaching a woman to become a dominant? Really? The author seriously needs to check what's 'topping from the bottom'. Hence, the whole second story of the woman is destroyed, which also delivers only frustration.

There is literally zero characterization and buildup of the story, which is kind of shocking, as the book length is really big.

This is the first story of Amity Harris I read, and I'm deeply disappointed. Maybe her writing would be satisfactory for someone into Femdom and Gaydom both, and who don't mind reading numerous mindless smuts involving random characters. I believe for anyone interested a properly written Femdom Erotica she would miserably fail only.… (meer)