Elle Saint James

This little novella wasn't bad but it wasn't particularly good either. It had some good potential. the set up where a desperate woman agreed to marry two men was interesting. She did think about it and decide that she didn't have any other options. There was a lawyer there who tried to talk her out of this unnaturalness. But then they just jumped into bed in the middle of the day and proceeded to have sex for hours. Then they had dinner and then went to a bath house and had a bunch more sex. Then they all three admitted their love for each other. Undying love in less than 12 hours. Who knew it was so easy? I know what I'm getting, after all I did buy a menage book, but really there should be some sort of realistic story. She's a desperate virgin. Less than a day later she's doing DP with two strangers in a public bath house. Some of the sex scenes were fairly well written so two stars for a good start and some decent but not spectacular love scenes. Just hmmm...… (meer)

Gabriel is driving home when he finds a beautiful woman, Suzanna, stranded on the side of the road. He over’s her assistance by calling a tow truck. As they wait for the tow truck Gabriel’s would be stalker comes driving up the road to him kissing Suzanna. Together they explain to the determined Cindy that they are seeing each other making it clear that Gabriel is off the market.

When Suzanna and Gabriel can’t find her a place to stay, he takes her to where he works where he has her wait in the bar while he talks his boss into letting her stay there. While waiting for Gabriel she meets Nathan whom she also feels a strong attraction, so when she discovers that they are best friends that share absolutely everything including women she is excited and eager to spend time with them. Pity it can only be for a short time since her own stalker is hot on her trail and she needs to get as far away as she can.

I read Unbridled Temptation, the first book in the series, and was a little excited to get into the next book but I wasn’t nearly as impressed with this book as I was with the first one. I feel there could have been more to the story line because the stalker was not nearly as big a threat as he could have been even with all the steamy hot sex scenes floating around. I saw more of Cindy making Gabriel irritated then I did the threat to Suzanna. Granted Nathan’s fantasy sex in the blacksmiths shop was entertaining and the bedroom and shower scenes were rockin’ but those weren’t the only things going on in the story. And the only sign that Suzanna’s stalker is in town is what he does to her car while it is in the shop, and doesn’t even take place until closer to the end of the book. Sex scenes are great but more about the actual story line would make this book much better.

My first and complete posting of this review can be found at http://lauralusbookreviews.blogspot.com/2015/12/unyielding-surrender-montana-dou...… (meer)