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Pretty woman-esque trope with a somber mood - at times a gritty and cringe worthy. Stiles is a street prostitute with a specialty for werewolves - who sometimes get rough with him. Derek is an affluent customer who desires to have Stiles all to himself. So he does. For a large monetary exchange, Stiles moves in with him and a much more boyfriend" oriented relationship ensues.

I liked this, though I kind of want more from it. Derek's loneliness and Stiles' recognition of it is tender as is Derek's protectiveness of Stiles. Derek's dirty talk left much to be desired is the only downside. "I want to put a baby in you ... I want you swollen with my baby"... in an AU that isn't even MPREG. Honestly I think if someone said that to me during sex, I'd be like, "What?" - preference I guess.

But it does have some great lines:

"Derek is so terrible at the stealth aspect of stalking, it's hard to find it threatening. It's like when cats try to hide from you behind a sneaker."

"He gets come in his eyelashes, but Derek licks him clean like a gentlemen. Or a dog. Both, Stiles supposes."




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MrsKnightley | 2 andere besprekingen | Oct 18, 2017 |
Fanfiction- Teen Wolf - Sterek
I'm not sure why this has such a low average rating (and I'm not wasting my time reading low star reviews to find out) but I enjoyed it. I would try more by this writer.
 
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AddictedReader28 | 2 andere besprekingen | Oct 16, 2017 |
Good story although the ending was rather abrupt. The so-called "dirty talk" was hysterical! I kept waiting for Stiles to actually be pregnant as a twist, but it didn't happen.
 
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DreZ | 2 andere besprekingen | Jan 15, 2015 |

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