Steve Karmazenuk

The concept was intriguing, and I did read the whole thing. Unfortunately, overall it didn’t work for me. The writing was bad, editing terrible, it was twice a long as it should have been, it had far too many subplots that added nothing to the story...many not ending, and unfortunately, the story didn't end with any kind of climax.

The story did keep me reading, however, looking for the climax where all the subplots come together, but it never came. Sadly, with better editing, plot work and a better ending (climax) this could have been a great book.… (meer)