This book was weird and sweet and funny. So worth it. ( )

This one isn't for me.
Manwhore Hero who continues to have sex with others while dating heroine.

A friend says during one of their separation times "Evie tells me you have been nailing every woman that looked your way the last nine months Razer. Yet you haven’t touched Evie or Sam since that night. You can drink all the beer you want, but if it is water you want, nothing will quench your thirst.”

He makes her out to be a prude as she doesn't like threesomes, she doesn't make him work for it enough.

3 stars and I really, really, really wish I could give it more. This book desperately NEEDS an editor . I beg the author to edit this book.... fill in all the gaping holes and revise the edition to make it better. The plot itself was awesome. It was a really unique idea for a book.
I knew going into this book that there were problems with this book! I was just hoping that they had been corrected, but NO.... not yet. I can see that I could really come to enjoy this series and the characters if the writing gets better.

Problems I had:
* This was a major plot.... and 179 pages wasn't nearly enough to develop it the way it needed to be. There were gaping holes everywhere and it was so annoying. It felt way too rushed, and I felt let down because it could have been sooooooooo good!

* There were multiple times that I had NO idea who was talking! I would re-read multiple times and still couldn't freaking figure it out, and I would just have to shrug my shoulders in defeat and move on.

* Grammatical errors galore!

* Razor was a jerk for the majority of the book and I had a zero connection to him. He didn't deserve Beth EVER!

* Beth got majorly out of character a few times.... She's very naïve, very sheltered, very, very, very inexperienced.... But immediately invites Razer into her home and gives him oral sex! Then she gets fingered while jerking another guy off in a bar. AND, then... so goes back to being prudish and back to her original character. Not buying it! She also forgave Razer wayyyyyy too soon in the end. Although, I think this is because of my first gripe that the book wasn't long enough and was underdeveloped.

♦ That saying... I should have rated it lower than 3 stars.... but NO WAY! I did like it, and I was rooting the story on.... That just goes to show you that it has the potential to be awesome. I will absolutely read more in the series as I see from reviews that they get better. ( )

I'm getting to know the different types of bikers that there's out there and I have to say that this one was my least favorite. There are some things about their way of life that I just can't wrap my head around it: the whole sex is a free for all thing was the one that bothered me the most. There was also the problem with the editing, the plot was a little weak and things were quite rushed at times. The problem with Beth's upbringing didn't seat well with me either: things were not properly developed or explained. Hope the next books in the series are better. ( )