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Bezig met laden... Architects of Destiny (Cadicle, Volume 1) (editie 2015)door Amy DuBoff (Auteur), A.K. DuBoff (Auteur)
Informatie over het werkArchitects of Destiny door Amy DuBoff
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Meld je aan bij LibraryThing om erachter te komen of je dit boek goed zult vinden. Op dit moment geen Discussie gesprekken over dit boek. The title of this book is extremely accurate. Reading this really feels like reading about the process of an architect – it’s extremely slow, nothing exciting happens, and in the end everything works out all the time. I read 50% of this book and then skimmed to 60% before I decided I wouldn’t finish it. It’s just too goddamn boring to deal with the last 40%. Let’s break down some of the sections of this blueprint of boringness, shall we? 1) The hero is as boring as stale bread. Cris Sietinen is the heir of one of the six big corporations that, together with the ominous ‘Priesthood’ make up the government of the world this story is set in. He is the second-born, but his older brother died, and apparently he felt like his parents are bitter over having him instead of his older brother as their heir, especially because he has telepathic/telekinetic abilities. So far so good. There is a lot of potential for anger and conflict and what do I know here – but the author just doesn’t really do anything with it. Cris knows that everybody else is wrong and that he should be allowed to use his powers. He knows that his parents are wrong. He runs away because he wants to ‘find himself’, something I have literally never heard any 16-year-old say, and of course he knows his way around everywhere pretty much instantly. He never really feels any negative feelings about where his story takes him, and while he does make a nice speech about how the Priesthood shouldn’t rule everybody, he has plenty few conflicted feelings about eventually returning to his family to pick up where he left off. Nothing ever really goes wrong for him. Which brings us to: 2) There are no actual setbacks. Like, at all. Interesting stories are stories of failures, and of people trying to deal with circumstances that threaten to overpower them. There is nothing of that here. Maybe there’s a vague sense of threat at the beginning, but even that is harmless – so he doesn’t get to train his abilities while he keeps living in luxury, big fucking deal. So he tries to run away, and nothing goes wrong. He gets to the space port with hardly anything even complicating it. He finds a ship that will take him no problem. The people on that ship are nice, hard-working space merchants who don’t deal with illegal shit, great. And then there’s all these conflict-teases that never really lead to anything worth reading. Example: Suddenly Cris wakes up and the alarm of the ship is on. He floats through the air, coughs up his last meal, then floats through the ship – and turns out it’s only been a bit of friendly hazing instead of, say, pirates taking over the ship. Then he manages to get himself lost in the seedy part of a bigger space station. He nearly gets sold off into slavery – but nah, he manages to escape, all on his own, with not even a hair out of place. Later he gets attacked by an assassin sent by the Priesthood, who allegedly is the most powerful organization in all the universe, but honestly, a chimp with a gun would have had a better chance at actually killing anyone than that bloke. Even with a blaster-equivalent being fired off in his face, Mighty Cris of course doesn’t get a stretch – instead he activates his super special powers and the assassin runs off like a kicked dog. 3) If the hero is stale bread, the other characters are month-old rice crackers. Seriously, all the side characters are basically there to transport Cris from point A to B, to act as an info terminal on two legs or to point out to him how special and powerful and unusual he is. Even the guy he spends a year with on board of a cargo ship stays what is basically a cut-out of your average sea dog In Space. Nobody but Cris has any backstory worth mentioning, nobody has any ambitions that don’t revolve around Cris, nobody has any negative feelings towards him. Snore. 4) This might just as well be a thesis on the interior design of space ports. About 20% of this book is an info dump delivered by the cardboard cut-outs that one might call side characters, 10% are Cris thinking the obvious or having inner monologues in very distracting and useless italic, and 70% are descriptions of every single goddamn space port and space base and other space space that Cris visits. I literally don’t need to know what color the crossbars at a tiny space port are. Seriously. It’s not that interesting. 5) Antagonist? What Antagonist? So I guess you could call the Priesthood the antagonist? But not really, because they have ‘plans’ for Cris? Or maybe his father is the antagonist – but he’s literally not showing up anymore after 5% of the book. Or maybe the anti-telepath sentiment of this world is an antagonistic force? Well, could have been if his telepathic/telekinetic powers would not always work out to his advantage. Even when we enter the extremely boring training segments (from the 50 to 60% point) the author doesn’t even give us the curtsy of a school-yard villain or a disapproving mentor. Nah, everybody thinks Cris is just the bee’s knees. And if he tells them he’s not, he’s told that his humility is going to bring him far. I’m still giving this book two stars because it was not offensive or bad enough to warrant one star. It just was… not really anything. At the risk of repeating myself: Snore. Fairly interesting read. The main character has psi powers, and can read other's thoughts, however this is frowned on by the priesthood. He plots to run away from home to try to join up with the TSS who can teach him this skill. Full of interest and intrigue, this book held my interest from front to back! Overall, I'd rate this as a meh book. It couldn't seem to decide what it wanted to do, so tried to do everything. I'm thinking the first two and a half chapters could have been dropped, starting the story much later, but it would mean a much better story. I'd do this become of some poor word choices, a very definite information dump -- complete with lantern to spotlight it, and bad order of plot points.The characters have little to no personality. The story line really doesn't have much to pry it out of the miasma of other similar stories. The book seemed to improve as I reached chapter 6 and I didn't struggled as much as I had the first two and a half to three chapters. I find less to snark about. The characters haven't really improved, the story line is still a mushy mess, and now I'm getting a "Everyone has a Hogwarts book" vibe. The romance story line feels forced and the main character feels rather stiff and stilted. Why did they include a glossary of terms at the end of the book? Nothing was that strange, if you read close enough... Debatable if I get the next. geen besprekingen | voeg een bespreking toe
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Out of sight beyond Earth, the Taran empire spans the galaxy from its seat of power on Tararia. Cris Sietinen was born with rare telekinetic gifts-abilities he refuses to ignore, regardless of the governing Priesthood's decrees. But, as heir to the most influential Dynasty on Tararia, only a stifled life of business and politics awaits him within the confines of his family's estate. Determined to be true to himself and explore the potential of his abilities, Cris leaves Tararia to begin a new life touring the stars. When Cris unexpectedly receives an invitation to join the Tararian Selective Service (TSS), the only organization to offer an official telekinesis training program, a new future awaits. It's his dream opportunity to be among people like himself, free from the Priesthood and political objectives. Except, Cris' path was designed, and he's right where the Priesthood wants him. Architects of Destiny is the first installment in the Cadicle series, a new space opera epic with elements of "Dune" and "Ender's Game." A fast-paced space adventure with intrigue, coming-of-age and romance, this short prequel is a prelude to the defining events in Tararia's history in the ensuing years. Geen bibliotheekbeschrijvingen gevonden. |
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Then there's the conspiracy between the Priesthood (here treated like the big, bad, boogeyman) and the Tararian Selective Service (TSS) … I found the whole scheme silly. And the few women this story are just background noise. Even poor Kate gets short shrift.
In a lot of ways, this story reads like a poor fanfic crossover between the far better written Dune and, yes, Ender's Game. ( )