This is a train wreck of a story. There are leaps in scenes without connecting sentences, leaps of logic without information. Also, the characters had no real life, no real interesting personalities to speak of; they felt and read like cardboard. The plot is too thin to carry the story far, despite its interesting premise, and the murder "investigation" gets hijacked into being a series of dates for the MCs. ::rollseyes:: The worldbuilding's not bad, though it, too, could do with a lot of beefing up. Maybe get this to a professional editor? Might help, might not.

Suffice it to say, I wasted $6 on this thing, but finished it. Masochistic much? ( )

Dnf - chapter 12 audio

Dnf - chapter 12 audio