This is the first book in Hilari Bell's Farsala Trilogy. We're introduced to Jiaan--a peasant-born bastard son of a noble taken into the Commander's household as a page, Soraya--the Commander's fiery, willful daughter and Kavi--a spy perhaps, but who knew where his loyalties truly ran? Each chapter follows from a third person viewpoint of one of those three young people--who's lives are intertwined together no matter what the distance (of land or experience) forces upon them. Additionally there are short chapters that fill in the legend of Sorahb, a legendary figure who will rise again when the need is great.

And frankly the need is pretty great as the book goes on.

I'll be frank I was recommended this book by a friend who thought it would be a fun joke to see me stumble through it. Its heavy on political intrigues and machinations as well as a healthy dose of murder, revenge and fighting. I hesitate to say its a hard book to go through because its not, its fairly simple as long as you keep the players of the game straight and their movements. In particular Kavi creates problems because he is a trickster, a guy who wants to watch out for himself and himself along, but finds himself caught up in plots that go over his head. He's not a bad guy, but he's blinded by his hatred for Farsala nobles who have only ever treated him like dirt beneath their boots.

Since this is the first book in a trilogy, the end is not tied up in a neat bow. Honestly by the end of it everyone is so far removed from who they were in the beginning, that its hard for me to remember (as I re-read the book) that Soraya really was that bratty or that Jiaan never spoke up for himself. Despite her flaws though Soraya is my favorite character--she's a brat, true, but she is also young and unable to fully understand what is happening around her. All she sees is her father sending her away as an unruly child when she wants to be seen as a young woman ready to embark upon her own life and hold herself equal to everyone else. She doesn't see that the Hrum (the enemy) has learned from their past failures, that the easy victory Farsala took for granted for so long is not a stone cold fact, that her father wants her to live and be free of what the Hrum will do to her if they caught her.

Kavi and Jiaan are interesting polar opposites. Very easily Jiaan could have been Kavi if the Commander hadn't taken him in and raised him far above what his peasant (bastard) status demanded. They also view the Commander and his 'generosity' in entirely different ways. Jiaan is grateful for the chance while Kavi is suspicious of a noble man who would act the way he does.

Overall this book is a great way to start a fantasy that makes you think and scheme like the characters. Nothing comes easy in Farsala, least of all answers to what it means to be a hero.
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This is one of my favorite series. Complex and diverse characters, engrossing story, poignant mythology, and no romance! ( )

I remembered reading this a loooooong time ago and declaring it pretty awful, but for some reason I got the insane urge to give it a second chance. Since I knew this itch wouldn't go away unless scratched, I dutifully tried to reread it.

But I just can't do it. It's not so much awful as just dreadfully boring. I just don't care a bit about anything that's happening and the idea of reading 350 pages of stuff I don't care about does not appeal to me. Plus, Hilari Bell's characters seem too complicated, and not in a good way. All of their names are way too similar, and I'm constantly having to figure out who she's talking about, because there's so many of them and half of them aren't even important.

So no, I won't be finishing this one this time around. ( )

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The novel, Fall of a Kingdom by Hilari Bell encompasses how one can succeed in the face of great challenges if you stick with good friends and stay determined. In the beginning the main character Sorahb is a law abiding citizen and is for the most part weak. in the middle her kingdom is taken over and she gets friends together and strikes back. at the end she overcomes all of the challenges she faced and prevailed. the lesson learned is that even the weak is very strong.

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